If I am to follow the much sage advice I should be preparing my latest submission proposal email for the next agent, instead of writing this. A sophisticated form of procrastination, perhaps.
But you get to a point when you think where have I gone wrong? Especially after having felt i’d finally got it right, then that rejection comes through (or passes through my over-zealous spam filter. The last couple of times in red, as if the computer was somehow alerting me that it could be a dangerous one to read – dangerous to my happiness, especially on a Friday). OK, so it could be the content of those first few chapters. Otherwise I may have missed a trick in my pitch.
So is there a secret to The Pitch? Truth is, if I knew of one I may’ve succeeded. But what I have learned is that it’s best to condense the synopsis and introductory letter/email into something that can be read within ten minutes minutes. (Agents would doubtless speed-read.) Start with a few lines to say what it’s about. I also provided a blurb link http://www.timeover-sf.com/ which does the same, but that might be overkill. I added the synopsis as a separate doc, so more emphasis is on those first few lines to encapsulate a 100,000+ word novel. Not easy!
Really, at the most, all I can tell you is how to fail better.
Btw, I’m still having that technical problem mentioned in my last post. Will have to do something about that.